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Slaughterhouse-Five
Kurt Vonnegut's Slaughterhouse-Five is, of course, a classic of American literature from the back half of the 20th century. The book was adapted to film within just a few years of its initial publication, and it's also been adapted to the stage and radio. Ryan North and Albert Monteys, however, have adapted it to the comics medium for the first time.

North and Monteys use the basic plot and structure of Vonnegut's original. Meaning that the story hops around protagonist Billy Pilgrim's life in a seemingly haphazard manner. It starts with him in World War II, then jumps to his childhood, then to his mother's deathbed, then to a party in 1961, and then back to WWII. All in the span of a few pages. Although Vonnegut (and North) describe Pilgrim as a time-traveler, it might be more accurate to say that he experiences his life non-linearly. And throughout the story, we see how the events he experienced during war impact the rest of his life.

But you can read a review of the basic story anywhere. It's been around a hald century at this point. How do North and Monteys handle the adaption?

Interestingly, the first thing they do is acknowledge that it's an adaptation. The first seven pages meta-textually explain (using comics) how Vonnegut came to write the original, and how their adapation is similar but in a distinctly different medium. As such, they then provide a visual guide to some of the characters and the different version of Pilgrim we'll see throughout the book. And, in a manner that seems to acknowledge they're racing to catch up with Vonnegut himself, they then start the story proper a little ways after the original. Kind of a "we now return you to the story, already in progress..."

Not surprisingly, other elements gets shortened or eliminated. Pilgrim's son is all but gone entirely, as is the co-pilot who survived a plane crash with him. Also, notably, Kilgore Trout is now an author of comics as well as pulp stories. This is perhaps most significant as we're treated to some of Trout's stories, and they're presented as if they were published in the 1960s... with Ben Day dots and mis-registration and the like.

That approach, where North and Monteys try to take advantage of the different medium, shows up at several points. The sequence where Pilgrim watches a movie backwards is told via story boards. The Tralfamadorian book is actually shown for a couple pages... and is, of course, as unintelligible as Vonnegut described. Roland Weary's thoughts about explaining his 'adventures' once he gets home are shown rather than explained. While most of this book does depict the original story as told in comic form, the creators here aren't simply transferring Vonnegut's words into illustrations, but they're making it a solid comic experience.

The one element I didn't care for in that regard, though, was there was also a visual depiction when Pilgrim went from one time period to another. Admittedly, it's been 15-20 years since I've read the original, but I don't recall Vonnegut marking those changes quite so explicitly in the text. Further, Monteys does an excellent job with the visual storytelling anyway, so there's never any question when Pilgrim has switched time periods even if you ignore the visual markers he puts in place. These visual markers don't really reduce the reading experience or distract the reader per se, but I think the story would have flowed just fine without them.

Overall, I would say that North and Monteys have done an extremely admirable job in translating the novel into comics form. If this had been available when I was a teen, I would've been reading Vonnegut's work MUCH earlier and not have waited until I was in my 30s before even considering him. Well worth picking up!
Here are this week's links to what I've had published recently...

Kleefeld on Comics: Comic Strip WIIFM
https://ift.tt/2HzvIUE

Kleefeld on Comics: W.A. Roger Predicts the Future
https://ift.tt/3otV4nv

Kleefeld on Comics: The Lure Of Nostalgia
https://ift.tt/34ztahP

Kleefeld on Comics: The Hero Who Could Be You!
https://ift.tt/34Df1Ae


When I was a kid, I had one of those personalized storybooks. They had fairly generic art, and a simple story about (in the book I had) losing a pet honey bee, and getting a bunch of friends and relatives to help track it down. The "personalized" parts were that my name was used for the main character, my friends' names were peppered throughout, and my street address was used the protagonist's home. Not to mention that the whole story took place in my hometown.

It was a clever notion, actually. Mom (or maybe Grandma -- I don't recall) filled out a simple form asking for some basic information and some (probably severely underpaid) worker typed out a standard script on top of pre-printed art pages dropping my particular details in various blank spaces. Some time later, I got a book with those bound pages making yours truly the center of attraction.

That was all done manually.

Obviously, with computers and database capabilities being what they are, it's easy to personalize any material much more quickly and efficiently. Heck, my father sends out solicitations for his magic shows all the time that specifically geared towards the individual. And he's just doing that in his basement off his personal computer. He does a simple mail-merge and, before you know it, he's got five hundred personalized letters with his color logo at the top, and five hundred matching envelopes. Three months later, he sends out five hundred personalized postcards.

X-Men & Captain Universe coverMarvel actually tried this back in the 1990s, cleverly taking advantage of their Captain Universe character. It was an early use of digital lettering and, as you can see in some of Bill's scans, not necessarily an ideal result with HUGE gaps left in the lettering balloons to allow space for longer names. I should point out, too, that they had male and female versions of the art available.

Now, it clearly wasn't a hot seller for Marvel -- I only recall seeing ads for it for a few months before they disappeared. But people still produce those personalized books, so it must be at least somewhat profitable. With the cost of digital offset printing decreasing and no need to be typed by hand, I'm certain that they must be cheaper to produce than they used to be. Heck, Shutterfly has a deal now where you can get a 20-page book with your own selection of personal photos and completely customized text for only ten bucks!

Question One:
How come no one is doing comic book versions of the same? Marvel's Captain Universe is an IDEAL candidate for this, but even without the "hero who could be you" shtick, you could produce an comic where a character is drawn in alongside the Licensed Protagonist™ whether that's Batman or Hellboy or Savage Dragon or whomever. For that matter, any company could pull out some of the old comic characters that have lapsed into public domain.

Furthermore, with digital coloring and POD, you could let every individual select what skin tones are used, so that it's not just an option open to Caucasians.

Question Two: How come no one does this on their webcomic? There, the cost would literally be NOTHING. Fill out a quick form with your name/info, and every time you come to the new comic page, you get word balloons that reference you as the hero (or whichever character). Talk about bringing your readers into your comic!

PLUS -- and here's the particularly clever marketing angle -- their filling out that form initially gives the creator(s) a database of their readers! Better than just checking your site metrics to see how many hits you got, you'd be able to see AND MARKET TO almost every Tom, Dick and Harriet that was a regular reader.

The other marketing angles are enticing, too! Customized mugs and t-shirts and whatnot featuring the comic art and the user's own name/info in place! Maybe a customized URL to go to! I think that would TOTALLY be a engrossing way to bring readers in and get them on board as not only readers, but as advocates of your comic!

The more I think about this, the more brilliant it seems. I think the first person/group to really capitalize on this and do it well will make a killing! (At least as far as webcomics go.) The technology is readily available, and I'm not THAT brilliant, so how come no one is doing this already?
A friend of mine had the following thought a while back and posted it on Facebook just to get it out of his head:
The lure of nostalgia is safety. You already know the outcome; you survived. Find someone who yearns for yesterday and you've probably found someone who is afraid of tomorrow.
He quickly received a number of positive comments, and elaborated a bit...
... I think there is a distinct difference between appreciating something, remembering it fondly, and yearning, which connotes, to me at least, an aching quality. We can ache for a past that includes loved ones we miss or happy events without necessarily feeling fear of what tomorrow may bring. But I think the less specific way in which some people view the past in a nostalgic way -- that vague sense that it was all better yesterday -- is fueled by the comfort of knowing we made it through the trials and tribulations we faced and the fear of not knowing whether we will be able to do the same with today's or tomorrow's challenges. That's really what the thought was all about.
How much of that plays into reading comics then? How much of reading the same title month in and month out for decades on end is an appreciation of the character, and how much is an appreciation of what those stories helped you with when you first started reading it? I mean...

Detective Comics #1000
If you read Detective Comics because you think Batman is cool, that's one thing. But if you read Detective Comics because you really related to the stories that were being told in the title years ago when you were feeling alone and alienated in high school and you don't think the current creators really get Batman the same way that they did back then, that's something else entirely.

The problem, of course, is being able to recognize that distinction (or one like it) in yourself. Because an emotional shift like that tends not to happen overnight. It's a gradual process, and not one that's easily quantifiable either. So you wind up reading the same comics for decades with only the vague sense that the stories aren't nearly as good now as they used to be. It takes some time for you to stop and consciously contemplate why you're reading the books you're reading, and whether or not that's based on the actual (and current) merits of the book or it's primarily a holdover from days gone by.

You could still enjoy the book, and even enjoy it for very different reasons than before, but if you're enjoyment is based more on nostalgia than anything else it might be time to see what's going on in your life NOW and what you might respond better to.
This (sadly) still relevant cartoon and the text below (with my emphases) is borrowed from The Opper Project. In a year when a Republican president is actively trying to get the population killed, and his stated reasoning is "for the economy," it's hard not to see the menacing threat between labor and capital. I might have to buy some stock in pitchfork manufacturers.
Harper's Weekly cover cartoon
Creator: W.A. Rogers

Publication: Harper's Weekly Vol. 45, No. 2319

Publication Date: June 1, 1901

Description: One of the broad effects of industrialization was the new rivalry between workers and managers, or as it was phrased at the time, labor and capital. The powers of factory owners and managers increased as industrialization proceeded. Workers experienced long hour, low pay, and job insecurity but could do little about these conditions. Labor gained strength, however, as more and more workers joined together in unions. The political scene became more favorable to labor once Theodore Roosevelt took office following the assassination of Republican President (and friend of capital) William McKinley in September 1901.
Brenda Starr

We've seen a number of newspaper strips hit the big recylce bin in the sky this year.* What happens when a comic strip gets cancelled? Not the ones that are axed by the creators themselves, but the ones where the syndicate says, "You know, I don't think we'll continue this any more." Sometimes, there's a vocal minority of fans who are disappointed, perhaps mad, but often most comic fans shrug and say, "Meh."

There are a number of reasons comics get cancelled, but not infrequently, it's due to low sales. The synidcate has decided that producing the comic is simply not profitable enough (or at all). They've expended as much as they feel they can do drum up interest and support, but it's just not selling to newspapers well enough to justify continuing. Now, maybe that's because the comic sucks. There is certainly no shortage of crappy comics out there! But it's possible, too, that it was good, but just didn't make it to the attention of the right audience. Bad or insufficient marketing, you might say.

Now, when a comic gets cancelled, whatever money was transferred in that process halts. The creators don't get paid, obviously, but now neither do the editors, production guys, anyone the publisher had advertised with, etc. I'm not saying these people necessarily get stiffed money they're owed -- though that does happen -- just that there's no future earnings coming to them because of the comic. In the cases of larger deals, most of those people will be able to switch gears and find other similar gigs. The creators shift over to other gigs, the printers pick up additional customers, etc. Smaller folks might have bigger problems. Maybe the creators have to do freelance ad layout work for advertising circulars, maybe the printer goes out of business entirely.

But regardless of what happens to these people, they broader comic fanbase still gives a collective "Meh."

It's not that they don't care per se, but if an individual isn't invested in the comic in any way, they don't have a reason to put much emotional stock in the loss. They look at the strip in terms of, "What's in it for me?" (In business shorthand, this is often abbreviated as WIIFM -- pronounced "wiffum.") "What do I, as a consumer, get out of whether this book continues or not?"

If a person was reading the strip, their loss is direct; they don't get to read it any more. Whatever they got out of it will no longer be available. And because they had some emotional attachment to it, they have at least some modicum of concern over the people involved. "Good luck finding a new gig, Creator X!" Sometimes, these fans follow the creator on to their next project, if possible.

I don't know that anyone gives much thought beyond that. To the printers, USPS/FedEx/UPS workers who deliver different parts of the work, the folks at the syndicate... I don't know that most people make that connection between any one cancelled title, and everyone throughout the whole process. Not that it's easy to -- we never hear about the guy who delivered the papers from the printers to the warehouse, or the admin at the printers who had to juggle a bunch of invoices for any one project, or the teenager who unpacked shipping boxes at a distribution center... I don't know if their namelessness is an active way to make things emotionally easier on us consumers, or if we're simply unable to make emotional connections along those more distant lines.

But the question still boils down to "What's in it for me?" And while I recognize that at some level we have to do that -- we can't be equally compassionate about all issues everywhere -- it's a shame that more people don't extend their interest in comics beyond the handful of books they actively read.

* Yes, I know Brenda Starr was cancelled back in 2011. I specifically chose an image of an older strip that's been gone a few years in case anyone is still bitter about some strip that got axed more recently.
Here are this week's links to what I've had published recently...

Patreon: Off Topic & Content Apologies
https://t.co/jsQLjvHLFF

Kleefeld on Comics: New Comics for the Blind Project
https://ift.tt/2T78zuT

Kleefeld on Comics: The Real Anti-Life Equation
https://ift.tt/3m7auwa

Kleefeld on Comics: Woodstalks
https://ift.tt/3m9J1Kc

Kleefeld on Comics: Comicdom's Paradox of Friendship & Hatred
https://ift.tt/2IOjsQk

Kleefeld on Comics: Upcoming Events
https://ift.tt/3olJKKc